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19 décembre 2013

Essay

Write a 250-word essay on the subject below. “Most people think that being famous is heaven, but in fact it’s more like hell.” What do you think? Consult with your book page 122. Exercise 3 and 4.

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-Write one line to introduce yourself. Ex. OL AN , (M), 19 years old, 1 year in ITC

- Respect and give the number of words written

- It is not authorized to write in the other groups

-Deadline: 20h – 5th January, 2014

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• VERY VERY GOOD, SHORT, PRECISE; RICH IN VOCABULARY AND ENGLISH SENTENCES; WELL BALANCED IN IDEAS; I REALLY APPRECIATE; PROBABLY ONE OF THE BEST CONTRIBUTIONS<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Today, we see exactly that people obtain their various living styles that some was born and lives in wealth and fame but others trying all of their efforts to reach those. By that, two different ideas come up; being famous is heaven but in fact it’s more like hell. BILLIANT INTRODUCTION<br /> <br /> • <br /> <br /> One prefers to be famous of the reason they found, being famous is big success in their lives, giving them much honor in their living and society that others admire and be proud of them. Others wise OTHERWISE, celebrities have an easy life because when weTHEY are famous, much pleasure, wealth, admiration, reputation, comfortableness, beauty and love will come and serve them like they are being in the heaven. So, that’s why they fancy that. <br /> <br /> Conversely, it sounds more like hell to some other. One life is meaningful not just on being famous but in fact satisfaction and happiness that life gives is thing. Furthermore, we can ask ourselves why do we need to obsess with fame and celebrities which have to work hard, spend lots of money on thing and security and also it’s hard and not free to new friends. <br /> <br /> To sum up, being famous seem to be heaven or hell, depending on people themselves that being famous gives them much pleasure, money, reputation and seems being in heaven, etc. Like hell when fame can’t give them satisfaction or happiness sometime or freedom in making new friends. Finally, we shouldn’t judge those, me also I’m in middle of their thought.
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My name is KHUT Titya, (M), 3rd student at ITC, doing civil engineering.<br /> <br /> KHUT Titya, (M), 3rd student at ITC, doing civil engineering.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Today, we see exactly that people obtain their various living styles that some was born and lives in wealth and fame but others trying all of their efforts to reach those. By that, two different ideas come up; being famous is heaven but in fact it’s more like hell. <br /> <br /> One prefers to be famous of the reason they found, being famous is big success in their lives, giving them much honor in their living and society that others admire and be proud of them. Others wise, celebrities have an easy life because when we are famous, much pleasure, wealth, admiration, reputation, comfortableness, beauty and love will come and serve them like they are being in the heaven. So, that’s why they fancy that.<br /> <br /> Conversely, it sounds more like hell to some other. One life is meaningful not just on being famous but in fact satisfaction and happiness that life gives is thing. Furthermore, we can ask ourselves why do we need to obsess with fame and celebrities which have to work hard, spend lots of money on thing and security and also it’s hard and not free to new friends.<br /> <br /> To sum up, being famous seem to be heaven or hell, depending on people themselves that being famous gives them much pleasure, money, reputation and seems being in heaven, etc. Like hell when fame can’t give them satisfaction or happiness sometime or freedom in making new friends. Finally, we shouldn’t judge those, me also I’m in middle of their thought.
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Most people think that being famous is heaven, but in fact it’s more like hell. What do you think? <br /> <br /> As the higher people, they want to be famous because they want to show the power and the reputation and the life style so there is one concept of enough. Some people think that the price of fame is too high and the other think that it is simple, so that there is one quote said that “Most people think that being famous is heaven, but in fact it’s more like hell.” <br /> <br /> In order to know what the consequences of being famous are, we need to define what is heaven and hell. Heaven for the religion is a place where God or the gods live and where people go after they die. One more thing, it is a place which has a lot of thing that we need, and also about the happiness. Because of the majority of the people, they want to be famous. If a person is called a famous person, so that they are very rich so they have a lot of money or they have a range of advantages. Hell is a situation, experience, or place that is very unpleasant or causes a lot of suffering. It means that they think it doesn’t have the peace, or difficult to communicate with other people. So that the consequences of being famous is according to what the situation of people is because people in different situation think in different way of the way of being famous.<br /> <br /> In conclusion, some people are happy with being famous and some people are unhappy. To me, hell or heaven is not important, the important is that we are happy or not.
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My name is KHLOEUN Reaksa,Sex M, 4 year at ITC<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Many people dream about being famous. They would do everything to appear on TV, radio or Internet. They want to be admired and loved by fans. The media show rich and beautiful stars and it is believed that their life is full of hapiness and love. Although it seems to be true, there are many disadvantages of being famous.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Despite the fact of being vain they simply want to be rich. And so they are. They have everything what they want to. But most of them are hard to satisfy. Famous people have got many requirements and conditions to meet by festival organisers. They don't have to be afraid of their future. Luckily, many celebrities help poor people and join organisations like UNICEF to help children around the world. <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Everything has got its dark side and being famous also have. Celebrities have no privacy. They spent lot of money on bodyguards and protection. Papparazzi go everywhere where famous persons go. They take photos even when celebrity is in the loo or eating. It's terrible because every step is being watched. Gossips can ruin their life because we sometimes don't know if the interview is real or just the journalist's lie to make people to buy more copies of this magazine. There are many people who didn't manage to cope with this pressure of being famous. They fell into addictions or commited suicide.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> To sum up being famous have got many advantages and disadvantages. Fame is fickle and you never know when it ends. For me it's not worth to destroy your life in return for money and glory.
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